Hi Vicki, nice start here, it's kind of cinematic trance, if there is such a thing!
A few suggestions. The drum beat could do with variety and build. You could probably find a couple of loops to superimpose. I would also say a sub-bass line would be useful. It will be good to see what @paulads provides with extra synths, but mainly I think this one could build and build with lots of extra layers towards a big finish.
But you're up and running with some good initial ingredients, great, so good luck in shaping it up.