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Summer Rain
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hardtwistmusic
Stadium Tour
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Central Oregon Sunset
Re: Summer Rain
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Reply #15 on:
November 20, 2019, 02:06:45 AM »
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Not like your song, but the title reminded me.
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dinnerwithgreedo
Platinum Album
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Re: Summer Rain
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November 22, 2019, 07:56:41 PM »
This is great! Sounded similar to Blur.
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Wicked Deeds
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Re: Summer Rain
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November 23, 2019, 02:38:40 PM »
I jumped on the wrong track here my friend but it was great to revisit your song. The guitars are ace. This is so we'll developed!
Paul
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CaliaMoko
Stadium Tour
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Strumming on the couch in pigtails
Re: Summer Rain
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November 23, 2019, 04:10:39 PM »
I love this! It's so much fun. I don't have much to criticize. Maybe the strong beats don't match the strong syllables once or twice, but maybe that's just a cultural thing and doesn't count...I don't know how all words in British English are pronounced. I've listened a few times the past several days and figured I better write something about it before it gets too old.
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