Take It Away

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ChrisPrice

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« on: August 30, 2021, 01:43:22 AM »


Take It Away

Going around the houses, for somethin’ I gotta say
Gotta be the right moment, so this could take all day

I don’t know how to put it to you
but straight from the heart
Let’s take it away

All in the vibrations, I guess that it’s meant be
The missing piece in the jigsaw, if only we could see

I don’t know how to put it to you
but straight from the heart
Let’s Take it away

I have a new song to sing, a new story to tell
It happens time and again, and we know it all too well
I got another page to write, another chapter on the way
All in a few simple words, gonna tell you, tell you right away

Going around the houses, for somethin’ I gotta say
Gotta be the right moment, so this could take all day

I don’t know how to put it to you
but straight from the heart
Let’s take it away

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moraamarolaloba

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« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2021, 12:42:56 PM »
You have a very authentic style making songs and this track is very good, the melody, the instrumentation, the mixing and lyrics, a very good product! @ChrisPrice

Have a nice Monday!!

Mora
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« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2021, 11:13:56 PM »
very smartly written and upbeat
Where'd you get all that optimism?
lovely song

I wonder if you get to play live on stages
lucky punters if they come across you!
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2021, 08:49:09 AM »
A positive, well-recorded song. The music is very danceable and I liked the lyrics. Back vocals are well done. Pleasure to listen to.

Maya