@CaliaMoko - You know V, this must have been tough to write, let alone sing, I'm actually like the closeness of the vocal (I always loved your voice) and maybe reduce the production, you know how Mississipi Moon worked so well. Sometimes drums are too much, maybe find another way to imply the rhythm, then perhaps use just some gentle percussion, introducing a new piece per verse, but gentle mind, low tuned congas, not doing much..
It might work with a high quality vocal plate verb on the BV's...
I can hear violin in there somewhere, you know one of theose things they play at the waist, and perhaps a tin whistle for a repeat of one of the melody motifs...a chorus would be an idea...
@Ashes for Dreams - you're a whistler as I remember?
Just ideas V, keep well