Hi Jack,
I hope you doing well. I'm sorry but listening to your tracks you giving me an understanding that you are the most quite person in the world lol.
Please take it as joke.
Overallssss in regards to this particular track- Well written, but a little bit monotone, try to make varieties within a track, change chord progression, add some extra background guitar that will fingerpicking the same chord progression ( For example you have a soundtrack called "Leasowe Beach" you did brought a variety there and this is what I'm talking about. As far as I understood you don't want to use drums / beats on your music ? If you don't, then this really takes out of the "box" should I say, this is what makes to stand out from other?
Thank you for sharing your work.
Best Regards,
Slava B.