Another New One I am Working on Got a really nice tune to it as well

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Bloggeris1983

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« on: March 08, 2013, 04:15:47 PM »

Bye Now

I'm pinning my hopes on you,
god!, tell me it's true,
what there saying about you.

That you can purify my soul,
mend all of my broken bones,
and set me free.

Sorry is just another word,
Wont stop you from getting hurt,
As you already know.

I don't know what the future holds,
but i know where i will be.
You cant change the past,
But I want this to last,
There's nothing quite as good as you.
No, there's nothing quite as good as you.

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« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2013, 04:56:11 PM »
Its short , simple..add a bit more......do you sing it yourself and work out where it`s going....perhaps you plan to repeat it all?

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« Reply #2 on: March 10, 2013, 01:38:57 AM »
I really liked the purify my soul and mend my broken bones part :)
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« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2013, 10:59:09 AM »
Thanks Lyrycalsoulz  ;D It is a really nice tune u can listen to it here from my old band that perform ed it but sound s much nicer acoustic.

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