Nice guitar tone man. This is kinda Floydy.
Nearly turned it off though when I saw another song moaning about that Trump joker.
My advice is use your imagination, dont be deceived into thinking world news makes good songs, avoid cliched topics.
Your voice would certainly sound clearer if you took out the other vocal takes running alongside, but I understand how confidence plays a big part in that.
Hope that's not too negative man, because its a good sound you got here.
Review some songs here and peeps will get you back.