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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: LilPeeper on May 29, 2021, 02:43:02 PM
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Consent
Wet patches on threadbare sheets
Dual pleasure confirmed with receipts
Names lost in the throes of passion
Raw sex never goes out of fashion
Was she Joy or was that just her feeling?
Mouth wide, gazing up at the ceiling
Kinky one, got the scratch mark to prove it
Better get me some ointment to soothe it
Then she appeared
Like a bolt from the blue
Stern face, stood tall
"Shame on you"
Girl I don't know quite what you're accusing
Pass my pants, this act is real confusing
We both know how last night musta went
Consent
Consent
Boy, how can you just claim it's nothing?
When I said no, you kept on touching
We both know how last night truly went
Repent
Repent
Dirty looks from all my peers
One lie told and the truth disappears
Facts lost in a haze of fury
Tough call for a judge and a jury
Look I don't know quite what she's saying
I'm not the thug that you're portraying
We all know how that night musta went
Consent
Consent
Girl I don't know quite what you're gaining
You rode me without once complaining
We both know how that night really went
Consent
Consent
Consent
Consent
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I'm a bad judge of songs without music
but there's a roughness to this that I like
would be good to hear the music that lives up to the promise of the lyric
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Hi Rightly, thanks for the comments. I really wanted to look at a subject from a less heard of point of view and this one seemed topical and I haven't heard others discussing it from this angle. Unfortunately I have zero instrument ability or skills so for now I'm just writing lyrics, but anyone would be welcome to try and turn my scribbles into a song with music if they want ;D