Happy New Year Everyone!
I wrote this a while ago but have kept it on the back burner. I'd like some feedback on it, especially if you think it reminds you too much of some other song.
It's about trying to love someone who's miserable all the time. I hope you can't relate, but I bet you can.
Thanks so much for anything you say. I really appreciate it,
Lynn
Listen to Rain Rain by faraway my lovely #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-468459034/rain-rainRain Rain
Hey, I was wanting to say I love you
But I'll save it for a sunny day
I was wanting to say I want you
But the clouds got in my way
Remember the day we first met
How the rain it started coming down
There haven't been any blue skies
Since you've been around
Rain rain go away
Rain rain go away
Come again someday
So, the rain is finally stopping
After 40 days and 40 nights
Now that the clouds are parting
I think I finally see the light
I wanted to say I love you
But now I'll save it for a rainy day
And without a cloud in the sky
Maybe you should go sway
Rain rain go away
Rain rain go away
Come again someday