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I Know, A Dark Original

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boninsongs

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« on: May 11, 2014, 03:47:55 AM »
Hey guys I wrote a different style song this time. I went for something a little darker. I hope you like it!



I have been working hard on my voice since I last posted. I feel I am learning to sing in a more natural style.

bewarethisboy

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« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2014, 02:48:02 PM »
wow that is a really great song. I don't know (no pun intended) what you have in mind for this but I heard it a storming ROCK track. Great riff and really good melody simple but effective hook. Bloody great!! But what to do with it. If you don't have band, then perhaps try to find one that could really give this a run for its money. It is short at the moment but an arrangement with extended intro outro and of course a guitar solo would really work with this. The riff is outstanding.

Of course it might be that you want it to be a nice acoustic song - and as that it is fine, but as something heavier - it would really catch fire. I hope this helps a little. All the best. BTB
not really good at anything - but as long as I am breathing I will keep on trying