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He Brings A Dream
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He Brings A Dream
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digger72
Stadium Tour
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Re: He Brings A Dream
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Reply #15 on:
January 13, 2018, 03:01:26 PM »
Hi Paul,
Very light and quite retro sounding.
The music is busy, but well thought out. Plenty of flourishes which keep the parts fresh.
Liked the lyrics; Enter Sandman WD style.
Good to hear there's plenty of variety still in the forum.
Digger
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Neil C
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Re: He Brings A Dream
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Reply #16 on:
January 15, 2018, 08:57:32 AM »
Paul,
Just enjoying this positive uplifting tune on a wet Monday morning.
Clever arrangement sparking all around your delicate vocals. Then the contrasting minor middle neatly resolved back to the the main tune.
Cool guitars too.
neil
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Jamie
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Re: He Brings A Dream
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Reply #17 on:
January 15, 2018, 02:31:58 PM »
Hi, excellent song well conceived, played and sung. Like the arrangement and instrumentation too. A touch of the prefab sprouts methinks!
Good stuff!
Cheers
Jamie
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The one
Busker
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Re: He Brings A Dream
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Reply #18 on:
January 16, 2018, 02:17:36 AM »
Hi Paul.
Not bad. Keep up the good work.
Tom.
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Katie Wilson
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Reply #19 on:
January 16, 2018, 09:32:18 AM »
Easy to listen to,sounds very professional - just second , third fourth fifth what everyone else has said
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refusedrevival
Solo Gig
Posts: 276
Re: He Brings A Dream
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January 16, 2018, 06:18:08 PM »
Hi,
This is good, nice melodies and good vocals.
The drum sound is excellent and very well produced.
Nice job
refusedrevival
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