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Girlinside
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Crossdressing Freak
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January 02, 2020, 08:00:24 AM »
I hope no one is offended its just a jest at myself - it’s more of a poem I think
Crossdressing Freak
There’s a guy down our road
whose a Crossdressing freak
he thinks no one knows
because he never speaks
I watch him through my blinds
as he goes out at dusk
I don’t really understand
But I suppose it’s a must
he doesn’t return
until the breaking of dawn
I see him tiptoeing
across the lawn
heels in his hand
looking the worse for wear
his hair no longer perfect
but I don’t think he cares
It looks like he’s got it out
of his system for now
until this time next week
when I do it again
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House463
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January 02, 2020, 10:17:32 AM »
I really like it. I love the rhyming and the last line really dropped a bomb which was great.
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devilhoned
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January 02, 2020, 06:24:20 PM »
Hi
It kept me reading, liked the `dusk`/it`s a must` line. Bit John Cooper-Clarke, you ought to read his stuff if you haven`t.
Very good.
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Girlinside
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January 02, 2020, 09:52:18 PM »
Thanks I definitely will x
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