[Jane99]

HI
I know this song is long. longer as other songs i guess but i hope that's not bad?

https://soundcloud.com/janeh99/brave

Lyrics:

3 am and still can’t sleep
thinking bout tomorrow what
if I‘mgonna fail
what if i’m not brave enough

And then i’m looking at your pic next to my bed
you used to say

You were brave enough to come till here
You were brave enough to live your dream
You can walk with your head held high
You were brave enough to try
Oh honey trust me you’re more than brave
More than brave

Tomorrows gonna be the day
when it decides if i can live my dream anylonger
i’m sared of loosing everything
 i’m scared of being not brave enough

And then i’m looking at your pic next to my bed
you used to say

you were brave enough to come till here
You were brave enough to live your dream
You can walk with your head held high
You were brave enough to try
Oh honey trust me you’re more than brave
More than brave

I’ve got a dream that i keep
A part oft hat i’ve been living now
but it’s time to live it all
And i know now

I was brave enough to come till here
I was brave enough to live my dream
I can walk with my head held high
I start to believe your words
your more than brave

I was brave enough to come till here
I was brave enough to live my dream
I can walk with my head held high
And i start to believe
That i am brave

[RyanHalsey]

Hi Jane

There's a really nice tone to your voice, i would almost like to hear more of it over the guitar in the mix. At first i was almost wanted to hear another chord at the end of the guitar part but actually it really works with the three chords, the third chord in that place really does it for me, i almost want to hear the last chord go on for another bar.

Good work

Ryan