[Steng]

Yeah much better! Fish and chips!...............with a very small portion of custard on the side. Good job.

[mikek]

i got interested in songwriting after i went to an underground club for the first time back in '84.  there was a lot of great, original music happening, and no one outside of that magical scene knew it.  this tune reminds me a lot of that time and those songs.  i dig it.

[IronKnee]

Oh....I like this one. Love the funky rhythm guitar........has a punk / Rock feel to it while being performed by George Harrison......very different....very cool.
Great recording, and love all of the performances.
Good stuff!
                               -T

[pompeyjazz]

Steng, Mikek, Tom... Thanks. I really need to turn that little bit of custard into a refined tartae sauce. Underground clubs in 84 Hey, that brings a few memories back  George Harrison Punk ? I guess he was.

[mickyplankton]

Just listened to this magnificent song again. With the greatest respect to everyone else on the forum, I reckon Pompey Jazz has raised the bar some distance with this number. Let's get inspired people!!!!

[pompeyjazz]

Well,  Micky mate, that is wonderful.  Made my day. My music is never going to be universally acceptable but hey I like that

[HenryOFarrell]

Hi mate, love the guitar riff at the start, the chords sound somewhat 'mysterious' at times which is a nice touch. It then gets even better when the drums come in and provide it with a beat, (I couldn't stop myself from tapping along!!).

In my opinion, I think that if you were going to make changes, the vocal effect in the chorus was a bit hard to understand, in terms of easy listening and what you were saying. It is still absolutely fantastic, but if I'm being picky.

Anyway, keep them coming,
Henry O'Farrell

[pompeyjazz]

Cheers Henry. I really appreciate your feedback.  Was going for a sort of crowd chant effect in the chorus with two separate vocal tracks.  Maybe it worked,  maybe not 

[adamfarr]

Love the dark, slightly unbalanced, dischordancy of the riff. Goes really well with the more airy lead over the top. Keyboards also a nice contrast.

I think you probably could do with a few more than two voices in the chorus to get that real shouty crowd effect.

Really energetic and catchy song though!

[man of simple pleasures]

cool intro! diggin the chorus! cool little song!