[Wicked deeds]

I know that I have presented the darkest songs since early June of this year.  Unfortunately, something really terrible happened at that time.  Well I battled through, all year long and now have reached the end of the year.  I really don't want my final forum song submission of 2022, to be something dark and brooding and so I have written a guitar vocal (currently a sketch).  It is my way of saying thank you to my beautiful partner Marie.  Her French country men and women would say 'Mon Coeur Marie' which translates to 'My heart Marie'.  Perhaps I wouldn't have made it to December with my heart in tact if not for this wonderful lady.  I have nothing but love to express for her.  Marie, my guardian angel!

https://soundcloud.com/wicked-deeds/mon-coeur-marie

Mon Coeur Marie

I take tea with milk, come sit with me a while.
Let your hair fall down, forget your frown.  We should celebrate in style.   
We’ll observe the lights that twinkle in the street.
We’ll acknowledge that the love we’ve found won’t ever face defeat.
 
We were flying high, invincible I’d say.
Everything, everything we wanted seemed to come our way.
When the rain came down our ship was sailing perfectly at sea.
We were pushed around, never washed aground.
When the storm hit you weathered with me     
mon coeur Marie.

I will thank the stars that shine down from the sky.
As they light our way, I hear you say “honey, please don’t cry!
I will be with you, I’ll stay here by your side.
Come on take my hand. Come walk with me. Hey honey walk with pride.”

We were flying high, invincible I’d say.
Everything, everything we wanted seemed to come our way .
When the rain came down our ship was sailing perfectly at sea.
We were pushed  around, never washed aground.
When the storm hit you weathered with me     
mon coeur Marie.
mon coeur Marie

When I stood with sadness, you were there for me.
You kept the darkness from my door   

We were flying high, invincible I’d say.
Everything, everything we wanted seemed to come our way .
When the rain came down our ship was sailing perfectly at sea.
We were pushed  around, never washed aground.
When the storm hit you weathered with me,     
mon coeur Marie.
mon coeur Marie.

Written by Paul Vasey December 2022

https://soundcloud.com/wicked-deeds/mon-coeur-marie

[popitup]

Happy New year Paul ! I like what I hear so far, just strumming and vocals, but the song is formed mostly, especially like the theme of a lover who supports you through a trying period . . . I'm sure you'll do some production things to define the sections more, as you always do, so I'll offer my encouragement to keep going on this one . . .