i like the song and the lyrics, i like the singing melody especially, i don't like the recording, but i understand it is only an i-phone recording....
but i think, just my two cents, sorry to be so brutal, you will need one or two songs of your seven sins album to get a totally different arrangment, doesn't have to be big orchestra, but this song IRA for instance could very well be played with piano chords IMO, in stead of the guitar....
just a thought
but great lyrics and melody