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man of simple pleasures
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blueprint entry - man of simple pleasures
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September 30, 2012, 12:08:55 AM »
here goes am sure they be some good produced versions of peoples entries but mines just a rough acoustic version with no ending and some lyrics missing as people will hear but i wanted to be part of this and get something up for people to hopefully have a listen!
cheers! i'l have a good listen to everyone elses, looking forward to hearing all the different versions!
http://soundcloud.com/mosp_song_forum_challenge/copper-coated-heart-rough-idea
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September 30, 2012, 12:17:39 AM »
Hey M.O.S.P I'm loving the groove.Your style really reminds me of someone but I can't put my finger on it. I really can't believe how different these all are. Bloody excellent mate, such a different slant to how I've done it, and how Michael did his.
Great stuff
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September 30, 2012, 06:32:50 AM »
Another great interpretation, so different, like all of them. I cant beleive how different everyone approaches the same set of lyrics. Very enjoyable listen MOSP.
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September 30, 2012, 07:39:55 AM »
Great stuff , the bob dylan version
it is interesting how different they all are , and lets not forget , this is about the approach and style
rather than the recording and production side of things .
well done mate
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September 30, 2012, 09:19:44 AM »
Cool musical style you picked here, was all the time expecting a mouth organ to set in, would go great with this !
Doubled vocals sound great too, and the guitar playing gives a certain sentimental aspect to this (the guitar intro sounds kinda familiar, can't tell you why though)
Nice work you did here !
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September 30, 2012, 12:40:31 PM »
good version! totally different
that "just play your games.."part works well
well done, man of simple pleasures....(but i am off to listen to the rest now)
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Paul
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September 30, 2012, 05:41:08 PM »
Once again, a very different entry. It's intriguing to hear the different interpretations from each writer. This is a very minimal approach with the marriage of lead and backing vocals being a particular highlight.
Well done!
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October 01, 2012, 01:57:20 AM »
As a framework this is great. The chorus is walking a fine line between catchy and twee however, so I'd be careful when developing this. The // I VI V //is a dangerous road if taken the wring way. I like the melody there so perhaps you are safe!
The melody elsewhere meanders a little for me. Once you have it distilled it may prove to be a grower.
The vibes are great in general
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mihkay
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October 01, 2012, 04:46:48 PM »
Took me a couple of listens to get into. I think it was the harmonies. I didn't grasp the melody at first listen.
But despite that It does work quite well once I got into it.
Are you going to develop it further?
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October 01, 2012, 10:10:03 PM »
mosp, you are a brave fellow tackling it sparse like this, vocal and gtr
no frills, nowhere to hide, shows you mean it and it comes across
sounds real
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October 02, 2012, 01:12:28 PM »
I will echo ANDY5544 ..you have your own interpretation going on here..and i can hear where your going with this..although as you admit it`s not complete...it could be a Bob Dylan song with the right production ..in fact it could be a top song in this competition if done right ....
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October 05, 2012, 11:15:57 PM »
cheers for all the comments and for listening!
big thanks to songsthatcry for providing the lyrics to this and to all who entered and also to habiTat for getting the ball rolling with the challenge!
i hope to work on this and get it finished and more polished and hopefully if i spend time in a studio to get a produced version of it!
cheers!
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October 07, 2012, 09:46:02 AM »
This is really cool as well MOSP - great delivery mate - full of coolness
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October 08, 2012, 07:33:38 PM »
cheers kafla! i try my best and i could do with getting something solid for this!
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