Hi, Irwin
Your lyric is coming along. Made a few suggestions below you can use or lose as you see fit.
Good Luck!
Carbor
You Got Me Singing This Song
©2014 Irwin abrigo
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(verse 1)
You told me I was the guy
you've been looking for
And as the days follow the nights
We will be rapped up in each other's arms
You said your love was true
And it will never die
Now you're gone
leaving me and I ----------------- The rhyme with 'die' sounds forced. Maybe, 'Leaving me to cry'
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(Lift)
In my bed I can't sleep at nights------night
Thinking of the things we use to do
Pretending you're here holding my pillow tight------- Why not holding the singer tight?(suggestion below)
Pretending you're holding me
You're not by my side -----Your love could get me through
(Chorus)
Where ever you are my darling
Near or far I'm performing, my love is strong----I'm performing for you this song
I have a broken heart and you're the cause ----Standing here with a broken heart
I'm standing here right now singing this song-------It's hard to move along
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(verse 2)
Remember gifts we'd exchanged
Loved that we had shared
And when we were alone that night
Held hands for the first time in the moonlight
We looked up to the skies
And saw the stars above
Said they shined
Just for two of us
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(Lift
When we kissed I felted you loved me
You said our love was meant to be
Completely confessed heard you found someone new
I'm in love with you
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(Chorus
Where ever you are my darling
Near or far I'm performing, my love is strong
I have a broken heart and you're the cause
I'm standing here right now singing this song
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(Bridge)-------------------------------Contemplate a new bridge putting a new angle on things.
We know he sings the song and he's sad and he's performing to a crowd, his feelings of heartbreak. Perhaps you could elaborate and tell us about this mystery person and what made that individual so special to the singer.
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(Chorus)
Where ever you are my darling
Near or far I'm performing, my love is strong
I have a broken heart and you're the cause
I'm standing here right now singing this song
(Repeat)
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