You Kill Me

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kittygordon

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« on: November 04, 2013, 10:43:12 PM »
My song what you think


Take a lesson
of my affection
You're my protection
Now you're blind I see
Never so smart
haven't got the heart
But now I'm back again
And he's dead
Guess I should have known what to say


But You kill me , you thrill me, just drill me
Burning inside, kill me, you've no where to hide
You kill me, the fire that's inside, kills me
take your time, you kill me, and everynight
just kill me, or take your time, you thrill me
kill me kill me kill me fucking kill me


Burning in the light
I'm fucking wasted
Can't sleep to night
Where the hell did I place it
In the shadows of my despair
the fire burning in my hair
Cutting wrists, double spilts
What more do I have to say


You treated me, the best you could
you treated me , the worst you could
So you put me in such a bad mood

You treated me, the best you could

Alter bells, hells bells, fucking with the devils in your head


but you never love me, you kill me, you kill me


You kill me , you thrill me, just drill me
Burning inside, kill me, you've no where to hide
You kill me, the fire that's inside, kills me
take your time, you kill me, and everynight
just kill me, or take your time, you thrill me
kill me kill me kill me fucking kill me



Stop wasting my time
Got these words that rhyme
Stop wasting my time
Black fluid running down my spine
You murdered me for one last time
Now it's my turn, to get what's mine
Black leaper, hard leather
Getting high on drugs
Stop in the name of love





You treated me, the best you could
you treated me , the worst you could
So you put me in such a bad mood

You treated me, the best you could

Alter bells, hells bells, fucking with the devils in your head


but you never love me, you kill me, you kill me

 

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« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2013, 11:52:00 PM »
how do you see it,,in a rock song format?

kittygordon

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« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2013, 12:37:15 AM »
Yeah rock format

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« Reply #3 on: November 05, 2013, 12:46:03 PM »
bump


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« Reply #4 on: November 05, 2013, 05:48:48 PM »
Hey
This is way cool!
I love "angry" lyrics - or lyrics that show any emotion, really and this song puts the listener inside the singer's head - which is great!
Nice work!
Paul

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« Reply #5 on: November 05, 2013, 08:56:44 PM »
Thank you!