Hey guys, this is my first song I've wrote and it is still a rough draft but I'd love to get one tips or things I should within the song. Thank you!
INTRO
I was happy until I wasn’t
I was in love until I wasn’t
You used to mean everything to me
until I thought I’d be happier without you
until I turned into an asshole
Months pass by as the leaves begin to change
then out of nowhere
I wasn’t in love, until I was
Words came out of your mouth
but your eyes told a different story
they said that you didn’t love me anymore
I pushed so far away that you couldn’t come back to me
realizing it’s all my fault
as the flame lights this cigarette
VERSE
Looking up at these stars
wondering why
why me
as bright as can be
knowing you’re with him while I’m falling into the black abyss
If I disappeared would you even care
would you worry
would you cry
would you forget me like I was nothing
like I was never even here
realizing I lost the moon
while I was looking at the stars
is this what love feels like?
CHORUS
You used to give me this burning feeling
like this cigarette as it hits my lungs
Can we rewind to the good times
rewind to when we were happy
rewind to being so high we thought it was just us
we can’t rewind
VERSE 2
New place
new environment
I’m all alone with this bottle in my hand
the only way I could forget about you
I finally found it
hiding from the pain with this warmth inside of me
I haven’t been sober for months
I can credit you for that
Why do I always feel like shit?
Is this what love feels like?
CHORUS
You used to give me this burning feeling
like this cigarette as it hits my lungs
Can we rewind to the good times
rewind to when we were happy
rewind to being so high we thought it was just us
we can’t rewind
BRIDGE
As snow begins to fall
I’m sitting there again
looking at the stars as their fading away
just like us
one last puff of this cigarette as it burns out
just like us
I realize I don’t need you
I don’t love you anymore
I’m letting go
CHORUS (edited)
You used to give me this burning feeling
just like this cigarette does as it hits my lungs
can we not rewind to the bad
can we not rewind to the arguing
can we not rewind to being so low I
I don’t want to rewind
I don’t want to…….
