[TheButcher]

great. as all the others mentioned.

the guitars are great; I wish there was some new instrument introduced a little earlier; it takes until 1:56 til sth new happens - thats pretty long; but your voice carries that part.

I think you ve done a very good job with the bass drum and the bass througout the song. bass could be a little louder; maybe.

So; this is very very good to me; not sure if 5:30 is a little too long for me.

With a song over 5 minutes; i d like to hear some more instrumental ideas during verse 2.

Well; that s all very picky - GREAT song ; LUV it

[DMBandit]

Thanks Butcher, not picky at all it's good feedback, cheers!

[montydog]

I think this is rather wonderful. It sounds modern but has a lovely traditional, folky feel. I think this is songwriting of the highest caliber. You've clearly taken painstaking trouble to get this sounding just right and you've ended up with a song that is classic in it's beauty.

I can't offer any suggestions for improvement - it sounds perfect to me.

M

[Dutchbeat]

very good vocal melodies! great vocal and super lyrics. Congrats on this songwriting, DMB!

[DMBandit]

Monty and Dutch, thanks a lot for the kind feedback!