Suggestions:
Lyrics
It was hell
But you can't tell
A new life,
someone (else's?) wife
Things are going well
Robbed of your teens
And your childhood dreams
Looks faded, feel so jaded,You just wanna be seen
(From my perspective "You just wanna be seen"is the essence of the song. I'd repeat it at least once more right here.)
Chorus
As the seasons change
One thing stays the same
Making a start with a brand new heart
Let's go round again Get right back on that merry go round.
2nd verse
Talking on your phone
That's all you seem to know
Waiting ages to make some changes
Yeah And now it's time to go
You just wanna be loved
Like everyone does
I know the feeling, and I share your dream
we both just wanna be seen.
We both just wanna be seen.
BRIDGE TO OUT:
Hope is gone if you wait too long
But dont get caught in the rush
Can't give in to feelings
too little, or too much.
Got to find a balance tween reality and dreams.
When you just wanna be seen.
When you just wanna be seen.
BTW... absolutely LOVED the guitar composition and playing. Hope this helps. Feel totally free to use or discard all suggestions with nothing owed.