[MinuteSekunde]

Encantado Mora, por la primera vez, creo que es una canción muy bien.

As an avid learner of language myself, I like to follow lyrics when they're not in English by the singer in the song I'm listening to and your voice really did that for me 

I think you've wrote a great piece overall ^^

[moraamarolaloba]

Hi Mora

I'm afraid I couldn't understand the lyrics as I don't speak French, but I still enjoyed the track, the vocal was very sexy and the music matched it perfectly, some very nice guitar too.

Mikey

Hi Mikey, many thanks. The guitar makes my song better!!! I put the approx. translation below my vid.
Mora.

[adamfarr]

I’d like to paint
A mirror over my village
On nights that are sad

Lovely stuff. This is poetic but without losing musicality - I think you have found a great combination. You and Marcus work super well together. I would like a better defined ending - could be quite dramatic and sad. But this is a really successful track already. Felicidades!

[mickyplankton]

Hi Mora.

Belated welcome to the forum. I really like your song. In particular i love the lyrics (translated). They are beautifully poetic. Probably the most poetic i have heard so far on the forum.

The music is also gentle and enjoyable to listen to. I had a question on the video. It seems to clip a bit at the beginning. Is this intentional or is it just my experience?

Either way, glad you posted this.

Cheers,

Micky

[moraamarolaloba]

Encantado Mora, por la primera vez, creo que es una canción muy bien.

As an avid learner of language myself, I like to follow lyrics when they're not in English by the singer in the song I'm listening to and your voice really did that for me 

I think you've wrote a great piece overall ^^

Gracias. You are very kind!

[moraamarolaloba]

I’d like to paint
A mirror over my village
On nights that are sad

Lovely stuff. This is poetic but without losing musicality - I think you have found a great combination. You and Marcus work super well together. I would like a better defined ending - could be quite dramatic and sad. But this is a really successful track already. Felicidades!

Hi Adam, many thanks. You are right, a better defined ending could result better. I have to mature!!!
See you, Mora

[moraamarolaloba]

Hi Mora.

Belated welcome to the forum. I really like your song. In particular i love the lyrics (translated). They are beautifully poetic. Probably the most poetic i have heard so far on the forum.

The music is also gentle and enjoyable to listen to. I had a question on the video. It seems to clip a bit at the beginning. Is this intentional or is it just my experience?

Either way, glad you posted this.

Cheers,
Micky

Hey Micky. You are really kind. Many thanks. All my songs are made with my poems. See you soon. Mora

Sure there are wonderful lyrics here that I have to discover.

[Bill Saunders]

Great laid back vibe - I love that - and your voice has a real smoky quality. What's not to like? Welcome to the forum, I hope you enjoy it here as much as many us do.

[Wolfini]

I like this a lot. You have a beautiful, very expressive voice that conveys a lot of feeling.

Beautiful music. I see myself sitting in a cafe at the beach, relaxing and gently nipping my aperol spritz listening to this.

Bye Wolfi

[moraamarolaloba]

Great laid back vibe - I love that - and your voice has a real smoky quality. What's not to like? Welcome to the forum, I hope you enjoy it here as much as many us do.

Hi Bill! Thak you very much for your time. "smoky voice"? Sure! Yours sounds like this too, deep... I like it.
See you soon. Mora

[moraamarolaloba]

I like this a lot. You have a beautiful, very expressive voice that conveys a lot of feeling.

Beautiful music. I see myself sitting in a cafe at the beach, relaxing and gently nipping my aperol spritz listening to this.

Bye Wolfi

Ha ha ha! Thank you. I love people feel relax with my music! The world is too much stressed! Good Aperol spritz! Mora

[Yodasdad]

D'accord, donc je ne parle pas vraiment français mais je pensais utiliser un site Web bien connu pour m'aider à me rendre intelligent à quelqu'un d'autre qui rwading ce qui ne parle pas français non plus.

cela a un groove vraiment moelleux et décontracté, très relaxant. Je ne comprends évidemment pas les paroles mais c'était quand même une expérience d'écoute agréable.

joliment mis ensemble et oui, la guitare fonctionne bien.

Yodasdad

[moraamarolaloba]

D'accord, donc je ne parle pas vraiment français mais je pensais utiliser un site Web bien connu pour m'aider à me rendre intelligent à quelqu'un d'autre qui rwading ce qui ne parle pas français non plus.

cela a un groove vraiment moelleux et décontracté, très relaxant. Je ne comprends évidemment pas les paroles mais c'était quand même une expérience d'écoute agréable.

joliment mis ensemble et oui, la guitare fonctionne bien.

Yodasdad

Merci, thank you! C'est dommage que vous ne comprennais pas les paroles, I put the approx. translation on the top of my post. See you soon Yodasdad