Steve,
not entirely answering the exam question for me they are both a tad wordy for a chorus. I like them simple, direct and repeated and/or repeatable.
i.e. Audrey Hepburn the girl with dark brown hair
Audrey Hepburn you'd have to stop and stair
Anyway the last four lines of the second section could form it, although the 'you'll find me having' is quite a lot to sing compared to the other three lines.
The first half of that second section could be a pre-chorus perhaps?
hope this helps
Anyway promising start and if you're looking for some musical accompaniment please get in contact.
neil