MOFO - production feedback

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dinnerwithgreedo

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« on: March 02, 2016, 09:30:14 PM »
So... it's finished. All the elements are there. I'm just unsure if i'm screwing it up with the mix. Please let me know guys!!! (It's now doing my head in). Too loud? Too noisy? Just right?

https://soundcloud.com/dinnerwithgreedo/mofo-2016-remix-test/s-DaoPn

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https://soundcloud.com/dinnerwithgreedo/mofo-2016-instrumental-test/s-YqZdC
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Neil C

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« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2016, 06:51:26 PM »
hi, great to have you back.

Super intro. liked the song but think there are some further areas you could chose to work on in terms of production and arrangement.

Keep the guitars up and bass up in the mix, and dial the vocals back a little bit, but keep up the aggression to go with the lyrics.

IT also needs some backing vocals on the 'aaah... your are crazy' refrain. which you should repeat after the chorus again - think AC/DC they get a riff and just beat it to death ;D

Wasn't convinced about the keyboard solo, nice sounds but think it should be a abrasive trashy guitar solo.

Could you put some warning up on the explicit content.

Hope this is some help
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Neil


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