Hi guys...here's one that I've resurrected from a few years ago...not totally sure if it's working or not, especially the outro part
...all feedback and suggestions would be greatly appreciated
https://soundcloud.com/crystalsuzy/falling-into-you-cSeasoned in the sun, mellowed by the moon
We catch in the rays and run, ending far too soon
You gently brush my mind, with whispers in my ear
I close my mind to find, the moment disappear
Laughing in the rain, I see you
Crying in the sun, I want you
Making peace with pain, I feel you, holding me
I'm falling, falling, falling, into myself
Falling, falling, falling, into myself
Falling into me...I'm falling into you
Then I look and see, that moment was a lifetime
Of dreams and memories, intoxicating wine
Footprints in the sand, I watch them helplessly
Time takes me by the hand, and pulls me, out to sea
Laughing in the rain, I see you
Crying in the sun, I want you
Making peace with pain, I feel you, holding me
I'm falling, falling, falling, into myself
Falling, falling, falling, into myself
Falling into me...I'm falling into you
far out weird spacey ending