Hey there folks. I am glad that I found this forum and this community. Will be sticking around for sure.
Currently, I am writing a song for an artist that provided me with the instrumental and the hook. He asked me to write 2 verses and a bridge.
Now in the chorus, he addresses his "love" interest as She. She this, she that.
The problem is that in the verses and bridge I've addressed her as YOU.
I have a question, would that be strange, because the flow of the song itself is perfect. I tried rewriting and changing it up with She in the verses and bridge, but it's just dull.
Now, there's the option to add You in the chorus as well, but then I risk too much repetition. It's a fast paced/party song, and it wouldn't be too obvious, but it still scares me a little bit. I also do not wanna break the flow of the song.
What's your opinion? Should I stick to the You and She? Rewrite? What would you do?