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The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea -- Please give feedback.

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Re: The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea -- Please give feedback.

« Reply #15 on: March 02, 2014, 01:17:18 AM »
What I think. I think you need to break it down for it is too long.If you do that you will have a nice little song lyric. I had done that many times before to my lyric when I happen to write them as long as your here.

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« Reply #16 on: March 02, 2014, 05:02:37 PM »
Thank you Irwin.  I think you are correct, and I intend to follow your advice. Looking forward to seeing/hearing something you have written.
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