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Title: Rock On (Collaboration with sid shovel)
Post by: ChrisPrice on April 23, 2024, 12:01:35 AM
Here's a bit of rock n roll mahem. It's a collaboration with a gentleman called sid shovel who I know from another forum. He threw down the gauntlet with these rather splendid lyrics (!!) I couldn't resist having a go at it. To be taken with a very generous pinch of salt. It's called 'Rock On'...not to be confused with the David Essex song or the Humble Pie album of the same name and vintage.

ROCK ON

https://audiomack.com/c-m-pricelivecouk/song/rock-on

Words by Terry Stanton, Music written and performed by Chris Price ©2024

Well I'm livin' in a glasshouse, with a bag of stones
Got a jazz-lovin' ‘keeper, won't leave me alone
Uncle Frank's gone n' let the dog out again
No visit from the Mormons since god knows when
Rock on
Rock on
Rock on
listen baby Rock on

Auntie Mary's doing handstands, on her rockin' chair
Grandad chase the maid, up and down the stair
Cousin Chris's in the attic, with his rock band mates
Sister Ellie's gotta bouquet, gonna marry Bill Gates
Rock on
Rock on
Rock on
listen baby Rock on

Rock on – rock on...etc.
Title: Re: Rock On (Collaboration with sid shovel)
Post by: shadowfax on April 23, 2024, 08:47:45 AM
Thats my kinda mayhem Chris mate..fabulous..loved it!
Title: Re: Rock On (Collaboration with sid shovel)
Post by: rightly on April 23, 2024, 10:09:18 AM
That's a short thrill fix!
In, n straight out the same door, no messing about!
I think you had your fun there!
Mayhem. That's the right word.
Well done, chris
Title: Re: Rock On (Collaboration with sid shovel)
Post by: Nick Ryder on April 23, 2024, 02:08:39 PM
Hi @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723)

Weirdly, having listened to a lot of your other songs, and from what you said, I knew exactly what this song was going to sound like and you didn't disappoint!! :)

Rock on indeed!!!
Title: Re: Rock On (Collaboration with sid shovel)
Post by: pompeyjazz on April 23, 2024, 07:04:28 PM
Great stuff @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723) Does exactly what it says it does - Had me bouncing man - You are so very good at this stuff :)
Title: Re: Rock On (Collaboration with sid shovel)
Post by: MonnoDB on April 24, 2024, 04:46:15 PM
@ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723)  – great rocker. I would expect no less from you – you always deliver. Very catchy and great pace and drive. Quality!
Title: Re: Rock On (Collaboration with sid shovel)
Post by: subvibe on April 25, 2024, 01:15:49 PM


Hi

Great Rocker & Really tight
top stuff

subvibe