I'm glad I clicked on this.
I haven't much in the way of imagination when it comes to finding the right music
for Songs which have already been written, so in this case I'm left with reading verses as I would do poetry.
I wonder how others read My lyrics.
So this seems to be a song void of hope, taking stock of a situation.
There are some nuggets here, the most obvious for me would be "the orphaned keys". That's delicious.
I also like "the fish that keeps biting", because I'm a lot like that, myself.
I often fall in love, it's rare that my feelings are reciprocated, n this leads to pointless suffering.
I think there's a little too much transparency here, I like to give my audience something to work on, but that's just me. Paul Canuck, in particular, has sometimes thrown me back to the drawing board n shown me there are other ways.
I'd like to see the other, longer version, maybe you made the wrong sacrifices.
I always like to hear your finished works.
Take your time, finish it n let's hear it.