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Ballot Box Blues (Spring Quest comp entry with PompeyJazz)
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Ballot Box Blues (Spring Quest comp entry with PompeyJazz)
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tboswell
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Re: Ballot Box Blues (Spring Quest comp entry with PompeyJazz)
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Reply #15 on:
April 17, 2019, 04:48:27 PM »
Super energetic stuff, how do you get this stuff sounding so awesome and punchy John?
Great anarchist sentiment in the lyrics and convincing vocal delivery. Liked it all very much
But given the subject matter do you expect me to vote for it!!? I'll have to spoil my comp ballot
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Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra
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April 23, 2019, 05:53:50 PM »
Good fun poppy punk with all the right ingredients. Guitar great John! Nice set of lyrics Martyn with some neat lines and tricky rhymes (I particularly liked the collection/stupefaction trick) and a clever and suitably anarchic vocal performance, which is really very nicely done.
'1-2-3 will you vote for me' is a great line!
And that dooby dooby doo really tops it off!
Well done chaps and good luck in the comp.
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cowparsleyman
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April 25, 2019, 12:34:56 PM »
Top Work guys, got me looking for those safety pins....where's that bum flap?
I love punk served properly, to me there's no half measures, amp 10, drums LOUD, bass 10, shouting in the choruses, this has it all.
Thanks for all the work involved.
Rich
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Martinswede
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April 25, 2019, 12:52:40 PM »
Great song!
Nice vocals and lyrics. Intense music. Maybe a bit heavy on the low end, could have had a bit more brightness.
Martin
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Binladeda
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Re: Ballot Box Blues (Spring Quest comp entry with PompeyJazz)
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April 25, 2019, 09:56:01 PM »
HA..Love it, of course
. My favourite bit was the "WAT" at 3.02
. (that's how weird I am Martyn
.....thankfully
)
Love the energy and drive guys......Sex Pistols meets Eddie Cochran. Just a great Fun piece...eminently listenable
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MartynRich
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April 25, 2019, 10:10:45 PM »
😂😂😂😂😂
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Paulski
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Re: Ballot Box Blues (Spring Quest comp entry with PompeyJazz)
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May 10, 2019, 12:51:28 AM »
Fun stuff guys.\
Like others have said - full of teen angst and energy.
You captured the punk vibe nicely!
Reminded me of the Monster Mash for some reason.
Paul
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LostBoy
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May 12, 2019, 08:53:05 AM »
I often find myself asking this question when listening to today's music... "Dooby dooby do, where are you?!?" Thank God you found it!!🤪🤣 great work guys! That was a fun listen!🎶👊🏻🎶👊🏻🎶😎
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