Hi guys. This is a really, really rough draft of our latest offering. Very much a work in progress. We've had a stab at writing a commercially viable Pop song for a female girl group like Little Mix, Saturdays etc
Rob is on vocals so please bear in mind that when reviewing. Imagine it being sang an octave or so higher by a girl group!
Feedback on lyrics, arrangement and melody much appreaciated
https://soundcloud.com/robbie_kevin/laws-of-attraction-1Lyrics
Law of atrraction ©Hearty/James 2013
V1
Hey boy. I haven’t a clue,
Why I can’t take my eyes off you,
I got a feeling. I think its new,
Feelings great, the feelings good
Cos, every time, I look at you,
I see flashing lights, hear sirens too
PC
Can you tell me, can you tell me
What I’m meant to,
What I’m meant to do
What I'm meant to do
You know I’m feeling, know I'm feeling
So attracted,
So attracted to you
So attracted to you
Attracted to you
C
It’s the, law of attraction,
I feel it happening,
Between me and you
Between you and me
You and me
It’s the laws of attraction
The physical reaction,
Between you and me
Between me and you,
Me and you
V2
It’s obvious, you turn me o-on,
My minds goin’ an' my heart is gone,
I dunno where, this all came from,
And no idea, where its going
Oh boy, I so wanna kiss you,
Tell me do you feel, this way too?
PC
Can you tell me, can you tell me
What I’m meant to,
What I’m meant to do,
What I’m meant to do
You know I’m feeling, know I'm feeling
So attracted,
So attracted to you
So attracted to you
Attracted to you
C
It’s the law...
B
Oh-oh feel it, feel it,
Feel the attraction,
Oh oh feel it, feel it,
The physical reaction,
The physical, physical,
Physical reaction
Physical, physical, now we know that
C
It’s the, law of attraction you know
its happening...