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S.T.C
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American Cars........out now
Re: Follow this Bob
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April 28, 2013, 05:20:44 PM »
`I bow to the greatness of STC,`
I quite like you ,ya know
Greatness,,,hmmm we shall see.
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Sing4me88
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April 28, 2013, 08:43:50 PM »
I can't disagree with other posters re tweaking the structure a bit but I certainly think most of what is needed is there. The title of this song had me intrigued and I really didn't know what to expect. I liked what I heard as I thought it still held that air of intrigue in that the lyrics don't give too much away and that there is quite a dark feel to the melody.
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teprometo13
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Re: Follow this Bob
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April 29, 2013, 09:49:01 AM »
I really like this. I think it is good to relate to and the lyrics are amazing.
Good work
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