Hi all. I have done some tweaking after the helpful feedback I've had on here.
https://soundcloud.com/michael-a-duffy/time-machine1. Took out one of the repetitions of the phrase 'Time Machine' in the chorus. Changed the lyric to accommodate.
2. Changed the chorus melody just a tad on the first line, so it comes in higher for more impact.
3. Scrapped the old chorus harmonies. Tried something different and then took a chance on adding heavy reverb to the now panned harms to go with the sci-fi theme. Hope this works. Only just done it, so I'll have to let it settle to make my mind up.
4. Increased the volume of the 'MC2' robot twins, as suggested by
@adamfarr I am happier with it now, so thanks for the feedback all.
Finally thanks
@MonnoDB Karen for that latest bit of feedback. Yeah I did have a look at what you mentioned ta, but thanks too for the general positivity. Yes I am toying with the album idea, but can't decide if it would 'just be for me'. Not terrible if it is just for me, as I deserve a treat every now and again, just like all of us do. But I'd love to hear your conclusion about your album work with Mr JB sometime. Cheers!