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IT AIN'T A TALKING SPREE

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Misanthropist

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« on: March 09, 2019, 10:52:06 AM »
IT AIN’T A TALKING SPREE

That man ain’t talking, ain’t talking to me
Is he thinking out devil’s eulogy?
I can’t really say,he seems to be fine
Without recharging his ego online.

That man ain’t talking,ain’t talking to me
Is he painting fences in his parting sea?
I can’t really say,he’s swaying on the spot
Without sensing he’s about to drop.

That man ain’t talking,ain’t talking to me
Is he playing dead to a certain degree?
I can’t really say,he did what he could
Without applying for any sainthood.

That man ain’t talking ain’t talking to me
Is he making fun of all divinity
I can’t really say,that’s my mate for you
Without talking we drink all night through

That man ain’t talking ain’t talking to me
That man ain’t talking ,
it ain’t a talking spree
It ain’t a talking spree
It ain’t a talking spree





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« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2019, 11:15:29 AM »
Just caught this in passing and wanted to say I think it's very good...i think it loses its way a tiny bit towards the end...but a little bit of tweaking would make it really excellent.
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« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2019, 12:15:55 PM »
Thank you kindly