[Kayles86]

United we stand,
Now we fight to the end,
Theres more to come in this kingdom we sunk,
If you were to favour me as your saviour,
Then come what may,
Let our feelings be known,
 Easy as the clear blue sky 
Down we walk to the deep blue sea

I entered this in the acrosstic comp. Feedback welcome

[S.T.C]

I know people have been supportive ,but your now just writing things,,very quickly i might add,that arn`t lyrics...or should i say a full set of them...

Making stuff sound poetic..isn`t all you should be aiming at!
Wheres the structure..chorus,bridge M8[if you want one]

I don`t think you have writers block.....i think you haven`t a real idea what song lyrics are!!

All is not lost...you can learn...theres certainly a bit of talent,with the things your posting..

do something new with verse 1]...verse 2] bridge ..chorus verse 3] verse 4] bridge ..chorus...and outro[ending]

[Kayles86]

Thankyou for your honesty i will be sure to take this on board.

[habiTat]

Stc is right, what I've tried, to extend the concept is picking a longer phrase, then breaking it down into chunks, maybe 4 lines each, like this...  (Certain elements will jump out as chorus, bridge etc as you put it to music..)


Decipher me

Listen to me
I took my time
Studied and tried
Teased out the rhyme 

Enough of me
Now what of you
To me you're an enigma too

On darkest night
Through winters eve
Having you here
Is all I need

Stand by me
Stand in line
Our love's not easy to define

Never to be parted
Gave myself to you
Before we even started
Aimed my heart and knew

Can you absorb
Keep abreast
Work me out
Add up this test

Read down the lines
Decipher me...
Something's hid-den underneath

[Kayles86]

Wow thats fab hab i used to write song songs with the V1 v2 chorus etc but seriously i just cant seem to conjure up anything at the moment all i can do is bust out acrosstics. More time is needed me thinks to brainstorm ideas but thanks for the help guys.

[BooBoo]

I think the best thing to do is if you can't think of anything to write, don't write. To me the forced lyrics seem to be worst when I'm writing so I just wait until I get an idea for something. I've been there where you want to write but don't know what to write so you write anything and I always find it harder that way. The lyrics themselves are not that bad but I just don't think they go together. Just one girls opinion though. Xx

[Kayles86]

Ur bang on there boohoo for now im just going to wait until something inspires me to write