Caramel

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« on: January 21, 2022, 09:39:40 AM »
well the music is mostly ready

it's just those last 2 lines should provide a bit more clarity or closure
i need to get something in there
it's a fun song and all makes sense with the music

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Caramel
(Song for Carmen)


it's day and night, Caramel
I think you're alright, caramel
thought we had something real good going
and strong enough to bridge over any fault
now it seems I was alone without m' knowing
underwater & unworthy of thy salt

 ◇ 

in the forest as we came across a fallen tree
 first impressions fell away under scrutiny
teaming with life and colour blindingly bold
 quietly singing with stories as yet untold

 ♤

what about this here groove, do you like?
I'm all about you, Caramel
would you dare to give it all for nothing?
monotony and default are ever near
is there a point to life without loving?
to think this is happening even with nobody here

 ♡

you n' your nose knows just when to stop
fortunately for you and me I do not
would y' try t' teach a' ol' dog new tricks,
n' put the bow wow flame to my candlestick

 ♧

is there a point to life without loving?
to think this is happening even with nobody here

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It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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