I'm so surprised at how well this has been received. I sent this to Kafla earlier in the week and he kindly said that he thought this was beautiful. Still, I felt very unsure about presenting this instrumental to the forum.
Hi Bin,
That's a great suggestion about including a spoken narrative. I thank you sincerely for the lovely comment that you included at the end of your review.
Thanks Dutch, as ever, you are very kind with your review!
Cheers Kafla!
Hi Michael,
I was feeling a little bit insecure about presenting this. It's easy to feel safe about posting songs when you're using tried and tested structures. An instrumental can also follow similar methods but I tried to make this very simple. There are only really two sections. The second is repeated multiple times with small additions to the instrumentation until the end of the song. I suppose I was uncertain about this being suitable as I haven't relied on lyrics to clarify what my composition represents. I am delighted that you enjoyed listening so much! :-)
Thanks songsthatcry cry for listening and posting your support!