[Skysk8er21]

Hello,
 Check out this original tune my buddy and I wrote.
 The lyrics in this song really mean a lot to me, tell me what you think  

http://getoutofthegarage.amplifiertv.com/channel/HiredHand+


keep that plus on the end I don't know why it wont let me keep it on the link

**Edit by Boydie**

Link fixed 

I know how it feels to fly
 I’ve felt time pass me by
 I know a may be safe and sound
 with both of my feet on the ground
 I may be able to run through the fields
 but this gravity is just to real

Because I know how it feels to fly.


 I spend the day at the beach
 and I love the warm sand on my feet
 It almost helps me to forget
 when I take a walk at sunset
 I feel the breeze in my hair
 but that one thought is always there

[Skysk8er21]

woops! that link would help
http://getoutofthegarage.amplifiertv.com/channel/HiredHand+   add that + sign at the end

[diademgrove]

Sorry the link didn't work for me.  Just took me to a fairly blank page and asked me to sign in. Could you please put your song on soundcloud or youtube,

thanks,

Keith

[jonpromos]

Nice. Not tiresome or repetitive , which is my main point of contention for most pop songs. I appreciate the harmonies and the subtleties of the rhythm guitar playing. There's nothing i could add to this. I surrendered to the music. Great job. The smile at the beginning of the video, however, triggered something very troubling and sinister way deep down inside of me. But i don't think that's your problem. It's probably mine.