What do you guys think of my lyrics? Any improvements and suggestions would be appreciated.
Title: Electric smile
Key: C
Verse 1) Hey!
You don’t know who I am
But why would you give a damn
About me
Verse 2) Hey!
You don’t know my name
I just watch play your games
Again, again
Chorus) You make me fly away
And burst my ribcage
My heart is blowing, heart is blowing
Heart is blowing up
Every single day
You’re always on my brain
My heart is blowing
Heart is blowing up
Verse 3) I
I see your electric smile
And can’t help but stare for a while
In awe
Verse 4) Your
Your heart’s made out of gold
But it’s always undersold
To me, to me
Chorus) You make me fly away
And burst my ribcage
My heart is blowing, heart is bowling
Heart is blowing up
Every single day
You’re always on my brain
My heart is blowing
Heart is blowing up
Solo
Chorus) You make me fly away
And burst my ribcage
My heart is blowing, heart is blowing
Heart is blowing up
Every single day
You’re always on my brain
My heart is blowing
Heart is blowing up
Chorus) You make me fly away
And burst my ribcage
My heart is blowing, heart is blowing
Heart is blowing up
Every single day
You’re always on my brain
My heart is blowing
Heart is blowing up