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Kevin j
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Re: Question Marks
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Reply #15 on:
August 14, 2013, 02:21:09 PM »
i like this, its nice and simplistic, and very relateable,
i think 'tears of acid rain' would be the better line.
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Valar Morghulis
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August 14, 2013, 10:22:08 PM »
plus 1 for Kevin's suggestion "tears of acid rain" - great song Jess.
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