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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Escaping
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Yesterday at 08:43:31 PM »
Quote from: kevysc on Yesterday at 04:47:19 PM
@moraamarolaloba Another inventive piece. Some great ideas going on in the music that work well in supporting your distinctive vocals. And your lyrics are , as always poetically intruging. (And nice video :) ) Kevin

Gracias @kevysc
I had to run a lot hahaha I like it too. Thank you so much.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Nothing Wrong
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Yesterday at 08:42:42 PM »
Glad to see you @kevysc with a new one!! and what new one!!! It sounds full of catchy energy, fantastic vibration, love the chorus, from the beginning to the end it carries you following all the story. Guitars give it an electric ambient, muy buen Trabajo
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You
« Last post by subvibe on Yesterday at 07:28:27 PM »

Hi
@pompeyjazz  @Elvis Nash  @moraamarolaloba @ChrisPrice @kevysc

Thank you so much for your kind remarks Its really appreciated

subvibe
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Escaping
« Last post by kevysc on Yesterday at 04:47:19 PM »
@moraamarolaloba Another inventive piece. Some great ideas going on in the music that work well in supporting your distinctive vocals. And your lyrics are , as always poetically intruging. (And nice video :) ) Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: .Don't Blame Me ... finished i think
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Yesterday at 01:29:50 PM »
Producers: Justin Morgan BZ Lewis Gavin Jones, there's a few more session players not mentioned . Its a lot of work , Start to finish . Well for them , I don't do much really ,I'm kinda lazy . do you wanna sing this again ? well it probably won't be any better then the last 4 takes , So I'm going fishing.
thanks man 
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Feedback on Finished songs / Nothing Wrong
« Last post by kevysc on Yesterday at 11:00:03 AM »
It's been a few weeks since I have been here, lots going on, but nice to see both new and familiar artists on here. Here's another one from me ... look forward to comments

https://soundcloud.com/kevinism1961/nothing-wrong


Nothing Wrong

V1
Is there a place that you call home?
Where it's okay to be alone?
Your silence hides how you feel about me
I find it hard to understand
How you can leave things so unplanned
It makes no sense that you want to be with me

Pre-Chorus
There are times when everything's alright
But I don't think I want to be here with you tonight

Chorus
There's nothing wrong, nothing wrong with me
There's nothing wrong, nothing wrong with me

V2
In shadows deep, lost in the night
You cut a sad and lonely sight
Your silence screams "Will you please help me?"
You are the other side of me
The person I don't want to me
So please let go, please will you set me free?

Pre-chorus

Chorus

Chorus

There's nothing wrong
There's nothing wrong


P.S. I am trying to build up followers on Soundcloud, so please take the time to follow me and I will reciprocate :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What would you dream
« Last post by Jazz101 on Yesterday at 11:00:00 AM »
Hi Kevin,
Thank you for your feedback, it is really appreciated and I believe invaluable for moving forward, we are always learning so thanks again,

George
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You
« Last post by kevysc on Yesterday at 10:55:37 AM »
@subvibe  Another excellent production. This one is a little more jazzy than your others (not a bad thing :) and I get the sense you have played around more with the instrumentation too. Some lovely little flourishes. Vocal great as always, Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What would you dream
« Last post by kevysc on Yesterday at 10:52:45 AM »
@jazz101 Really nice vocals (and backing vocals) and some good piano work. Interesting lyrical idea. Perhaps "dream" is a little overused? However, overall a solid production, Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Escaping
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Yesterday at 10:52:18 AM »
Hola a todos!
This one is different, a bit gitana and mysterious, I hope...




I run I run I r un
the night is cold
I run I run I run
the fog wraps the street lamps

I run I run I run
leaving behind
the steam of my breath
of my breath

Streets and more streets
with no name

North South East West
the Rose of Winds
is slept
in the bones of yesterday
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