konalavadome

Song for M (Rhapsody)

  • 3 Replies
  • 231 Views

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

OleAnders

  • *
  • Busker
  • *
  • Posts: 62
  • Ole Anders Walseth
    • Soundcloud
« on: June 16, 2023, 10:50:01 AM »


https://soundcloud.com/ole_anders/for-m/s-qbiVQeoBAuG?si=3df4e8e3cfd340aa8afecff83b4c951a&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

This is a bit of composed rhapsody meaning parts do not repeat but rather it develops throughout.

And if you find it keep it safe,
stay true it could last for life you see
love can be a sweetest thing 

Just make her laugh 
make her smile if you can
and count yourself lucky
its just so good to have someone to talk to 

And in your sweet eyes I see us young children laughing
and old holding hands by the old river passing
you’re with me now feel how good life can be 

When two find together It’s the sweetest commitment you’ll ever feel
feels so good to be wanted and still be familiar you ever notice what it means to me 

just want to be with you
just want to be with you,
for the longest time
just want to be with you
just want to be with you
be with you be with you be with you

wherever you are I’ll be there for you 

For the longest time I’ve searched for one like you
then I finally found you I’m so glad I found you,
I hope you’ll stay with me 

Since the day we started  all my heart’s been overflowing 
and I’ll be there, I’ll stay by you I’ll be by your side whatever comes

I’ll be there, I’ll stay by you I’ll be by your side whatever comes 
It’s the deepest commitment It’s the strongest emotion I’ve ever known

...embedding soundcloud really did not want to work for this one...
« Last Edit: June 16, 2023, 11:05:12 AM by OleAnders »

Nick Ryder

  • *
  • Solo Gig
  • ***
  • Posts: 458
    • YouTube Channel
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2023, 10:59:50 AM »
This is great. A very professional production, great melody and feel and the dynamics keep it interesting.

Very high quality work. Very well done!!

kevysc

  • *
  • Platinum Album
  • ****
  • Posts: 971
  • I'm Working from Memory
    • Your Song Contest
« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2023, 04:05:14 PM »
@OleAnders  (Ah, so that's what a Rhapsody is! Explains that Queen song :) )

Really superb production on this one, extremely polished sound, with everything supporting on not over-crowding. Lots of great musical ideas,  this works really well.

Kevin

moraamarolaloba

  • *
  • Stadium Tour
  • *****
  • Posts: 2025
    • Mora Amaro La Loba
« Reply #3 on: June 16, 2023, 08:43:58 PM »
Hola @OleAnders
as the melody appears it has such a natural flow, it's a great job, very good song!!! Delicate, sweet and having a so good sound!!!
I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
My Youtube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow