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moraamarolaloba:
Hola chicos!
Laughter, what is laughter? where does it come from? why? There are so many types of laughter that it would take too long to list: the result of something comic, of an unexpected encounter or encounter, a funny surprise, of tickling... But it can also be the result of fear, hysteria, cynism, not knowing what to do, giggles, laughter with a discreet cough, laughter that screams, frozen laughter... the other side.
When I laugh I realize that I am the instrument of a moment. How many tones can there be in that moment? How much colors in a sound?
And then, there is laughter with tears; It is the most complete having everything, all the layers of joy and the waters of the soul.
Oh! I forgot to include a laugh, in this video I laugh at everything with all the laughs, but silent.

Elvis Nash:
Hey Mora
A very inventive track and I dig the lyrics added now
It might help with more views

moraamarolaloba:
Hola Elvis, Gracias,

I was thinking about what images to put in this song, which without them would mean one thing and with them another... So I chose this video in which I was already laughing at things, facing them from frivolity and finally the humo, and the 2 pieces came together so well...

Thanks for viewing and commenting,  much appreciated.

You advised me to put the lyric and I realized it is the most important.
In terms of views Youtube has changed and now blocks my songs because they must consider that announcing me is spam....I would have to pay but for what? I started late, only 5 years ago, my style is disconcerting and I don't really care. ;)  what matters to me is seeing my work grow, enjoying my videos when I want and continuing to plan the next song. My ego has enough to see that I finish what I start.

Buen weekend @Elvis Nash

Elvis Nash:
Like Spotify or Fb, it takes some promotion $ to get noticed
You don’t have to go hog wild , A few bucks a day will do it

rightly:
I like this
creepy lyrics. They fire up my imagination

I've never heard my own laughter
Too in it to take note
an elemental aspect of living, living as opposed to surviving

I remember reading Jesus' life stories as a kid
Sometimes, there was a born again Christian within spitting distance (Evil laugh)
I remember asking if he'd ever come across a JC story where he was actually, intentionally funny
With unusual sobriety the born again said something to the tune of "nothing ages faster than humour"

I've heard Dylan capture humour (at least for me) in a song
With his persona there's a whole lot of setting the context.

It's rare we get humour in a song.

Songwriters will go to any length to give us something to cry about.
just saying

Hey, Great song!

 

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