Sing4me88- thank you, I'm glad you likes it.
Paulski- thanks for those suggestions, I'll definitely think about that. I'll have a look at the tenses and see what I can do!
Scarriff - thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Peppermint - thanks!
Fallow glass & HTM - hmmmm let's pretend I planned the epiphany thing
I think we're all learning from this haha!