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Sick Of Love Song

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BooBoo

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« on: May 18, 2013, 03:14:01 PM »
Hey! Me and Emma (teprometo13) wrote this song together. I think it's pretty obvious what its about so there's not really a need for an introduction;)

Sick Of Love Songs

Verse
Getting bored, getting tired,
Of all the songs that are fired,
In this direction, in my way,
It's the same thing day after day,
"Oh I love you" "I love you too"
Yippee it worked for you,
But look I don't actually care,
Stop saying love is in the air,

Pre chorus
Sick of DJs nattering away,
Always the same songs they have to play,
Bang my head against the walls,
Knowing soon I'm going to crack and fall,

Chorus
Why does everybody else get to be in love,
It isn't fair, should I give up,
Maybe I should just turn my radio off,
Because I'm sick of all the love songs,
Sick of all the red roses and love hearts,
Sick of life being so hard,
So I'll turn my radio off,
As I'm sick of all the love songs

Verse
All good things must end someday,
Makes me feeling angry in every way,
It is all sensationalised,
Love is built with bricks and with lies,
"Oh I need you" "I need you too",
No you don't, well you won't when it's through,
Everything ends in just heartbreak,
I would rather live life awake

Pre chorus
Sick of DJs nattering away,
Always the same songs they have to play,
Bang my head against the walls,
Knowing soon I'm going to crack and fall,

Chorus
Why does everybody else get to be in love,
It isn't fair, should I give up,
Maybe I should just turn my radio off,
Because I'm sick of all the love songs,
Sick of all the red roses and love hearts,
Sick of life being so hard,
So I'll turn my radio off,
As I'm sick of all the love songs

Bridge
He kisses you,
He loves you,
He marries you,
He divorces you,
No one actually cares for you

Pre chorus
Sick of DJs nattering away,
Always the same songs they have to play,
Bang my head against the walls,
Knowing soon I'm going to crack and fall
 
Chorus
Why does everybody else get to be in love,
It isn't fair, should I give up,
Maybe I should just turn my radio off,
Because I'm sick of all the love songs,
Sick of all the red roses and love hearts,
Sick of life being so hard,
So I'll turn my radio off,
As I'm sick of all the love songs
VOTE FOR JUNE LOTM!!!!!!!

Dutchbeat

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« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2013, 03:24:49 PM »
i think this is a very good idea for a song

a sort of anti lovesong - song!

nice, i think you could consider romantic ballad like music for these lyrics, which will make into a sort of lovesong anyway....

lyrics flow well, all great lines, but the pre-chorus seems the weakest spot to me, it is like the song doesn't need that, in my opinion, probably just my idea of what kind of song or music this could fit to




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« Reply #2 on: May 18, 2013, 09:21:07 PM »
I love that second verse so much I want to scream! Love the topic because I don't really like love songs too! It's so fresh and original and rhymes beautiful. Coincidentally, I also think the prechorus is the weakest part- nattering kind of reminds me of a coffee morning with middle aged women reading take a breaks :) but that would be my only criticism, your songs get stronger with every post, nice one boo x
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« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2013, 03:08:49 PM »
Thanks for your reviews guys.

Dutchbeat - thanks. I find it weird that you can think of it has a ballad sort if thing because in my head I always think of it a pop/rock sort of thing, Avril Lavigne sort of style. But that has also given me a whole new way of looking at the song so thank you!

Jess - aww thank ou for saying my songs get stronger with each post, it's nice that you think there is an improvement each time. The PC obviously shows that everyone is different as it was one of my favourite part of the song!! Haha. I do understand where you are both coming from but for now I think we are keeping the PC!
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« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2013, 03:18:46 PM »
Love these lyrics! That second verse..top class.  to me this song has a kind of maroon 5 feel to it, the only part i dont love is the bridge, i think compared to the rest of the lyrics, they just arent as good,  but thats just me.. Great song though, hope it sounds as good as it looks!
well, that escalated quickly..
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« Reply #5 on: May 25, 2013, 04:54:17 PM »
Great write. The chorus really delivers a punch but hell that 2nd verse is really something else. 'love is built with bricks and lies'.. brilliant... 'Oh I need you I need you too no you don't, well you won't when it's through'... again genius. What I love about this one is I can actually hear and feel you anger as I read these lyrics and hey that's what songs are meant to do evoke emotion so I guess its a job well done :)

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« Reply #6 on: May 25, 2013, 04:59:15 PM »
I'm sure Emma will be thrilled with the replies as she wrote the second verse! Thanks for the positive feedback!

Kevin J - thanks, I'm glad that you liked it!

Sing4me88 - like I said Emma wrote the second verse so I'm sure she will be happy with everything you have just said. I'm just glad you like it!
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« Reply #7 on: May 25, 2013, 05:06:24 PM »
I've just read the above comment re the bridge and if I'm honest I couldn't possibly disagree more!!! It encapsulates the song in a few succinct lines and I think it actually adds to the whole sentiment of the song. Love the sting with 'no one actually cares for you'. I'm not sure it is supposed to have the effect it had on me- I laughed when I read that line! Maybe I'm just evil ;)

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« Reply #8 on: May 28, 2013, 10:24:51 PM »

 hi booboo,
 very nice lyrics
 sounds a bit like this person needs some love and wants some love
 but can't get any so turns against it
 just what i get from it
 made my mind work, really enjoyed this work...