A Song For My Juliet (Unfinished)

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Kingsley13

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« on: August 28, 2012, 07:23:31 AM »
Just what I have down so far, decided I wanted what I have so far reviewed before I continue on in the morning. I am definitely not the best song writer but I decided I might as well try.


Dreams some sweet dreams my very precious Juliet
But please try not to forget
What is real what is here
That you have absolutely nothing to fear

*Instrumental*

I see the way they treat you
Just like any other girl
I see how they always
Push you down towards the ground
I see how you've always been standing there
And these other guys just plainly dont even care

So darling stop your crying
Please just wipe those tears
Please try to remember
That I am always here
To
Hold your hand
and help you through

Stroller2010

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« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2012, 01:49:41 PM »
These are really sweet, cutesy lyrics, I like them. But I would look at "just plainly don't even care" a little bit. Hope you carry on with it anyway.