Worst cliches?

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« Reply #30 on: May 22, 2012, 10:39:22 AM »
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« Reply #31 on: May 24, 2012, 05:00:59 PM »
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« Reply #32 on: May 28, 2012, 06:16:11 PM »
"I look into your eyes and all I see..." is one which really gets me. I know it's hard to write lyrics though, so it's inevitable people lapse into cliches, but there's nothing worse than hearing bad metaphors. Similes work better than metaphors if you're struggling.