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Sane In Insane Places

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« on: November 27, 2023, 10:42:13 PM »
This was inspired by an experiment done in the 1960s : they asked people to refrain from washing for 2-3 days and to show up at their local lunatic asylum (mental health facility in modern parlance) and to say they were hearing voices. Almost all were admitted (committed). The participants were also told that on the second day, they should tell the doctors that the voices were gone. The experiment was to see how long these "patients" remained hospitalized : some were kept in for up to 6 months! They re-ran the experiments in the early 2000s and, although patients were no longer hospitalized, almost all were prescribed anti-depressants!

Anyways, here goes ....

https://soundcloud.com/kevinism1961/sane-in-insane-places?si=29fb5efa28cf46908dc89a80bfc57bf4&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Sane In Insane Places

Is this madness or is it just the shape of my world?
Tinged with sadness, I have been afraid of the world
Isolated from the places I have known
Medication plugging holes in my soul

Chorus

I have been sane in insane places
And I need to know
Is it me or the world?

Am I just like all the others you have seen?
Or is these something that is special about me?
Diagnose this, tell me what is wrong with my world
Classify this, put me in a box, contain my world

Chorus

Chorus


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« Reply #1 on: November 28, 2023, 12:44:57 AM »
My buddy works for a crazy place here in Calif
That's a great line : "Medication plugging holes in my soul"
"That's what they do : Mental health might have improved over the years with new meds"
"I'm not really sure "
"Any way sounds good K"
"Its a real strong hook"

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« Reply #2 on: November 28, 2023, 02:02:28 PM »
Interesting theme @kevysc Like that chord progression, and it's got a David Byrne rhythm going on. Loads of space going on and some lovely little touches. Drums sounding really good on this one. What EZ drummer kit are you using ? Fab stuff

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« Reply #3 on: November 28, 2023, 07:36:13 PM »
Really interesting subject matter - love reading up on stuff like that. Excellent arrangement and captured the feel perfectly. Great to see you pushing that melody too - great stuff.

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« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2023, 12:14:03 AM »
I like the subject matter and I think you've done a really good job bring the story across but I also wish I could have hear a bridge somewhere in the song.

That's all I can say. Nice song!, Lovely melody!

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« Reply #5 on: November 29, 2023, 07:20:00 PM »

Hi
Great song & a very interesting subject matter
had visions of straight jackets !!!
The Kick was a real driving force & sounded fantastic
the instruments balance sounded good
Kev you keep coming up with great songs you have a lot of talent

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« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2023, 03:13:47 PM »
Hi Kevin.

It's a mad idea for a song.  ;)

Very defty done and like Bowie at his plaintive best.

Super concept and a damn fine listen.