Hi. I consider this expressionistic writing (poetry)
They are lyrics to a song, I was struggling for a while. I'm more comfortable with it now but it's still missing something.
Can someone help out, maybe add lyrics.
I know it's a bit vague and incoherent.
I could explain the source of inspiration if requested
Comments are welcome.
Stay Strong, Find a Way to Live stay strong
keep the genie in the bottle
find a way to live
and before too long
never could be
it is not easy
I have been there
and it is still with me
and they keep on coming back for more
they'll keep on coming back until there is no more
stay strong, find a way to live
stay strong, find a way to live
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good luck,
with them there newspapers
front to back graffiti,
coin in the cup
down-strum
doesn't ask for kindness
nothing above you're
older than the sun
and they'll keep coming back for more
and these multitudes of beating hearts are all yours
stay strong, find a way to live
stay strong, try to find a way to give
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vampires
find a way to bleed you
stripped of all pretense
somehow they'll love you
and they'll keep coming back for more
and these multitudes of beating hearts are all yours
stay strong, find a way to give
stay strong, find a way to live.
___________________________Ah what's it missing.
The music will have to be bad ass if I'm pull this off. Help me out.